Elevator Pitch No. 2
I had feedback from my peers outside of this class and it was important to know that I can strengthen this pitch if I added more statistics. I didn't feel that I had any silly feedback, I think it is always important to listen and try to implement the feedback that you are given. If you try to implement and it does not feel comfortable to you then you don't have to do it.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
I definitely made sure that I was more fluent and comfortable with the information that I was displaying to my viewers. I think I also used the facts that were given to me to be able to give something for the readers to grasp.
Hi, there! I like how you keep your mind open to all kinds of feedback. While I think it’s important to sort out the noise of useless criticism from legitimate helpful advice, it’s probably a good idea to at least hear what someone else has to say first. You never know when someone who you thought was random or just “talking to hear themselves talk” could actually offer a game changing tidbit of information for you to use in the future.
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